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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 22:06:16 GMT -5
Zip is allowed to fix this if theres problems with spaceing if there are any its late here so iam too tired to fix it atm
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 22:08:50 GMT -5
WOAH just a few minutes up and already 88 views?!
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Post by ZipZapMan on Jun 11, 2012 8:27:07 GMT -5
Question! Where did you get the bow? All you took was a sword and a knife so where did you get the bow and a arrow.
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Post by sbongkh on Jun 11, 2012 9:36:22 GMT -5
ZOMG Zauber, there is plenty of room for improvement. For example, good grammar, spelling and spacing makes it a lot easier to read. Try editing.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 11, 2012 17:39:13 GMT -5
:I ill edit it...but i have problems with spacing  and i got the bow off the dead guys body. |
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Post by ZipZapMan on Jun 12, 2012 22:53:53 GMT -5
:I ill edit it...but i have problems with spacing and i got the bow off the dead guys body. Thanks for clearing that up ;D |
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Post by sirveleno on Jun 13, 2012 3:02:24 GMT -5
My eyes hurt. Please add some spacing. Also stop making the server like Assassins Creed, it ain't.
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Post by sbongkh on Jun 13, 2012 4:54:35 GMT -5
WTF did you shoot him in the knee? GTFO. NOW.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 13, 2012 7:56:12 GMT -5
-.- CS sirv and sbongkh...CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM ONLY and watch the language also and the reason for shooting someone in the knee is to get them to stop running not because of damn skyrim referances
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Post by sbongkh on Jun 13, 2012 8:11:53 GMT -5
To stop someone running, you hamstring them. You don't shoot'em in the knee.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 14, 2012 19:12:34 GMT -5
I dont care...its how i wrote the bio its staying this way so nope not fixing this and look at my post above
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 14, 2012 22:25:30 GMT -5
God dammnit not a joke ok?does not have anything to do with skyrim jokes or anything ok?!
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Post by sirveleno on Jun 14, 2012 22:35:40 GMT -5
I am giving constructive criticism, hence the "more spacing" and "not Assassins Creed". Oh ya and fix your spelling, our server accepts bios with good spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. I am trying to help you get this bio accepted.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 15, 2012 22:10:40 GMT -5
If this was assassins creed id be wearing a cloak use a hidden blade and burn towers.So yeah not AC ok?not skyrim.Not yell at Zauber day for making something that sound like a refreance to another game!No this is AOC where we have a Crime syndicate that kills people on your order if you pay them.
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Post by sirveleno on Jun 16, 2012 2:42:12 GMT -5
Here's proof of Assassin's Creed. Here is an excerpt from Zaub's Writing:
Zauberius instantly spun around on his bar stool and cracked the bottle of beer over the mans head knowing the sound of a hidden blade.
You sure there's no Assassins Creed? Also Zauber calm down. We're just noticing things that need to be fixed. We're not trying to offend you.
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and i got the bow off the dead guys body.