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Post by Lucius.Sirfalas on Mar 25, 2012 15:37:43 GMT -5
Looks good. There's a few typos though, such as, Zakros not Zacros.
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Post by alwayzbored114 on Mar 25, 2012 16:07:59 GMT -5
Try and re-format it. Add Paragraphs, Bold the Titles, etc. Right now its just a huge blob of text thats hard to follow
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Post by fishbie on Mar 25, 2012 17:37:07 GMT -5
its still kinda a big blob of writing...
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Post by pajosftw on Mar 25, 2012 17:41:59 GMT -5
CRIME SYNDICATE. NOT ASSASSINS GUILD. Also, I'd appreciate if you asked me or zig before righting Crime Syndicate lore....
And we're not bloodthirsty. That's Lucavex. We're just impassionate.
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Post by fishbie on Mar 26, 2012 14:48:54 GMT -5
hey hey hey im just going with what ive seen gone by im not judging anyone.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on Mar 26, 2012 14:49:54 GMT -5
In RP terms you were never in TBC.
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Post by ZipZapMan on Mar 26, 2012 15:23:54 GMT -5
In RP terms you were never in TBC. That is true |
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Post by pajosftw on Mar 27, 2012 10:47:02 GMT -5
Still want you to remove the bit about the crime syndicate.
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Post by rartienal on Mar 27, 2012 13:19:43 GMT -5
This isn't RP lore. This is your history on the server, put into a messy blob of writing
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Post by pajosftw on Mar 27, 2012 15:33:15 GMT -5
Remove that bit about the Syndicate, it is contradicting yet-to-be posted server lore
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Post by ZipZapMan on Mar 28, 2012 7:50:20 GMT -5
This isn't RP lore. This is your history on the server, put into a messy blob of writing Ya, that is what I was thinking, this isn't a Town Rp, this is player bio writen in 3rd person. |
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Post by deltajesus on Mar 28, 2012 17:16:42 GMT -5
Umm fishbie, precisely how long do you think you can live for? Because you've been a warrior for two hundred years according to this.
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Post by shteve34 on Mar 28, 2012 20:04:31 GMT -5
do these town rp apps HAVE to be so.... accurate?
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Post by deltajesus on Mar 28, 2012 20:20:51 GMT -5
There's a difference between slight inaccuracy and being able to fight as a warrior for over two hundred years, and besides these are going to be proper rp places so it has to be pretty much perfect.
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Post by ZipZapMan on Mar 29, 2012 11:44:16 GMT -5
There's a difference between slight inaccuracy and being able to fight as a warrior for over two hundred years, and besides these are going to be proper rp places so it has to be pretty much perfect. Ya I get what your saying, depending on what race you are, then it can make sense, because for me, I can legit say ive been a warrior for 100 years because my lifespan is forever, but if I'm correct, then fish is a human and wouldnt be a warrior for 200 years. |
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