Luke.Frey

[omegaluke]

Hero Class
Rogue
Name
Luke.Frey
Bio
He was abandoned when he was about 9 within a year he was in a life of crime in his home kingdom of Larisian. he was released two years later he moved to Rull with his brother at twelve leaving his sister with their moms best friend. when he was 14 when he had his first crush her name was ryenn they dated until the we were wondering around the city outskirts then they were attacked then split up a few days later he found her body in the cave they were near he killed after thateveryone or so he thought there was a small group away in the next kingdom over when they came back they were furious, he has been trying to find the rest of the bandits and kill them all, when he was about 17 he started recruiting people to help take the bandits down when he first started he barley got any but after the bandits started to attack the city closer and closer they took the entire seaboard so the kingdom of rull was sent to a retreat island that is where it is today,but 1 fact only some people know is that his Brother was murdered by bandits, so they hired the guards to try to cover it up he has been recruiting since he was 17 there is a total of about 390 people willing to help him now, they travel through out the night looking for food and supplies he is on a good path with most guards he is paying 52% of the guards in Rull the other 48% are being payed over 3,000 no matter what and how much you pay even with food. he is the most fierce and wanted man in Rull if he goes to jail his penalty is 100 years to life or Death.he is looking for love again but maybe when those bandits are dead he might actually find a wife but that is a wile from now

Mine-Craft Username
omegaluke





Reason
please it took me hour and a half please look at it

[Aura.Blackwind]

I'll wait for Jesus to get here. Check out the accepted character bios. They'll give you an idea of what it needs to be. I suggest looking at AkureiMusume's, Lucavex's, Alwayzbored114's, Spwack's, and many others of that kind.

Edit: Also, not everyone gets it one their first or second try. And don't make new threads... Use the modify button.

[Orman Grandclaw]

Extend word-count by factor of four.

[Rei.Blackwind]

Needs more beef. It doesn't give enough info about your character.

[deltajesus]

I also don't think alwayz would like you saying he's a murderer without permission (unless, as usual, I've just missed everything and he did give permission?)

[Rei.Blackwind]

Oh and omegaluke, I deleted like 2 other threads with your name on it... please please PLEASE use the modify button at the top right of your post to make your revisions. I'ma have to cut a bitch if I keep having to delete extra threads. You're junking up my submissions!

[pajosftw]

A few months would take you back to January, where this character bios had not yet been implemented...

[Mackenzie.Heinzer]

Rouge is red in french, its Rogue.

[jube720]

The last sentence is a bit too long, put some periods in it.

[deltajesus]

Apr 18, 2012 19:54:45 GMT -5 pajosftw said:

A few months would take you back to January, where this character bios had not yet been implemented...

Not quite pajos, the first one is from December 5th.