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Post by sharpskull2 on Apr 18, 2012 12:47:12 GMT -5
IGN: sharpskull_2
name: Vladimer.Midalshia
race: High elf
bio: Was raised by his Mother in summerset isle
then an apocalypses came and his mother died the last thing he saw was
HEROBRINE then he woke up in this realm
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 18, 2012 12:52:26 GMT -5
Ok, Looks like i'm the first responder to this disaster.
no, no, and no. the only thing that really works here is the name of your character. for one, herobrine doesnt exist in AOC, for two, just.... your lucky i cant slap you IRL. theres no way in hell this'll get accepted. try putting effortinto it, rather than putting derp into a longer form.
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 18, 2012 12:53:15 GMT -5
Is this a troll? I bloody hope it is.
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Post by jafman7 on Apr 18, 2012 12:55:24 GMT -5
It's not a troll. He's just sad you didn't put much effort into it...
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 18, 2012 13:02:24 GMT -5
no, no, jesus means the guy posting the bio, not me.
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 18, 2012 13:06:15 GMT -5
Why don't people actually read other threads before they post?
But anyways, as mav said this needs an actual story, a check for spelling mistakes (isn't it spelt Vladimir anyway?) Go read my generic list of bio mistakes, almost all of them apply, especially the one about this not being skyrim, the high elf is bad enough but the sommerset isles too? Also an apocalypse is the end of the world, saying there was more than one but everyone else is fine seems a little strange.
And to jafman, wtf are you going on about?
EDIT: Please look at who posted something before you reply to it, I am insulted that you thought I'd wrote that.
EDIT2: Forgot to mention that the format's incorrect, the thread title should be the name of your character, preferably without smilies if you don't want instant distrust from me.
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Post by jafman7 on Apr 18, 2012 13:12:12 GMT -5
sorry I got confused. My mistake i didn't mean to insult anyone :/
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 18, 2012 18:42:57 GMT -5
Bloody hell! Yeah.. this is not a bio.. and yes, the title needs to be the RP name you desire for your character. You need some sort of history that's written out nicely.. etc etc... Put some effort into it please..... And yeah... what Delta said.. all of it. LoL
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