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Post by Musarra on May 8, 2012 16:23:10 GMT -5
There are bombs going off everywhere, the people I ruled screaming and crying. After several years of peace my kingdom is getting attacked. I run to the throne room and grab my sword and armor, this is where i make my final stand. The enemies pour in killing all of my guards. I rush at the sword in hand and i manage to take most of them down, but then i fell a sharp pain in my back. i turn around and see a man in black. I wake up to see a mage re-animating me "What happened!?" I scream in terror. "You died." Said the mage. "How long have I been... dead?" I asked. "Oh I would say... around 200 years." "200 YEARS?  " "Yes." I look around the room and i remember everything. I remember the man in black. "Thanks for, um... fixing me." "No problem you should probably go look around and see what's new." "Okay, but first I have to ask; why did you bring me back?" "To get kill Lucavex" "Lucavex?" "... The man in black." |
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 8, 2012 16:38:42 GMT -5
1. Corpses cannot be be brought back from the dead. 2. If anyone has reason to kill Lucavex, it'd be me. I just choose not to hold his past actions against him. 3. There is no way in hell you could/will kill Lucavex.
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Post by Musarra on May 8, 2012 17:20:01 GMT -5
1. its called re-animating the dead. 2. i dont care. 3. i never said i would
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Post by Dean.Fowler on May 8, 2012 17:22:17 GMT -5
1. Corpses cannot be be brought back from the dead. 2. If anyone has reason to kill Lucavex, it'd be me. I just choose not to hold his past actions against him. 3. There is no way in hell you could/will kill Lucavex. and he would be decomposed by then. |
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Post by Musarra on May 8, 2012 17:33:59 GMT -5
do you not know what RE-ANIMATING THE DEAD means
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Post by kingmii on May 8, 2012 18:22:13 GMT -5
It a bit short, I didn't really learn anything about what your character is like or anything. But don't listen to me I don't really know I just like reading bios.
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 8, 2012 18:32:13 GMT -5
Listen, I do not give a damn if you care. You died. No one can bring back the dead except for maybe Lucavex. Even then a soul cannot be returned from the void, especially after a long time such as that. My point being, change this, or I'm not accepting it.
P.S. Nobody here gives a flying (insert obvious next word here) what you think. If you don't like any of this, then you can just get out.
Edit: Also, look around the last few lines. "To get kill Lucavex." Yet you say you don't want too kill him?
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Post by minea on May 8, 2012 18:47:05 GMT -5
I agree Night, bloody new people that are too stuborn and full of pride to listen to more experienced players. This bio is just another example of a noob who wants to be boss instantly, a lot of grammar errors, a heap of crap about how s/he defeated heaps of bad guys while all of s/he friends anf family died around them, and also the obvious use of using the char Lucavexx ayanami without Lucavexx's opinion, i dont see why lucavexx would make an enemy of such a small unimportant character. Im not even important enough to be assasinated or used by lucavexx and im the general of the only amry that opposes him.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on May 9, 2012 16:47:30 GMT -5
Lucavex hasn't been around that long. We do have a necromancer class but the can only spawn in monsters not CONTROL or reaninate anyone that would be in the slightest coherent. This has very little info about your character himself. Lucavex can not even bring back the dead. He tried and failed. This bio has zero basis to stand upon. Fix it. Listen. Or don't get approved for a rp name.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on May 10, 2012 3:36:46 GMT -5
Dude-good luck trying to kill a being possessed by a god.
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Post by Musarra on May 15, 2012 19:40:17 GMT -5
I agree Night, bloody new people that are too stuborn and full of pride to listen to more experienced players. This bio is just another example of a noob who wants to be boss instantly, a lot of grammar errors, a heap of crap about how s/he defeated heaps of bad guys while all of s/he friends anf family died around them, and also the obvious use of using the char Lucavexx ayanami without Lucavexx's opinion, i dont see why lucavexx would make an enemy of such a small unimportant character. Im not even important enough to be assasinated or used by lucavexx and im the general of the only amry that opposes him. this is my 4th attempt at a bio im not new. but that doesnt matter now i am laying on a GOOD server not this sad excuse for "fun" |
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 16, 2012 10:37:46 GMT -5
I agree Night, bloody new people that are too stuborn and full of pride to listen to more experienced players. This bio is just another example of a noob who wants to be boss instantly, a lot of grammar errors, a heap of crap about how s/he defeated heaps of bad guys while all of s/he friends anf family died around them, and also the obvious use of using the char Lucavexx ayanami without Lucavexx's opinion, i dont see why lucavexx would make an enemy of such a small unimportant character. Im not even important enough to be assasinated or used by lucavexx and im the general of the only amry that opposes him. this is my 4th attempt at a bio im not new. but that doesnt matter now i am laying on a GOOD server not this sad excuse for "fun" Lol man, do whatever you want. No one here cares if you choose not to play. |
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