tales of craftigmegalords past....

[zinggar]

me,my mother,dad,my two brothers were out sailing and it was far out in the ocean and we hit land and we fell under water into the ocean floor and a hidden passage opened and we went inside and fell into an end portal we were very scared and the ender dragon tped the others to the village with massive amounts of recorces and cursed me...
i was turned half human half enderman...
then he tped me to a city known as age of city craft.......

[Shezz Raulo]

Ffs IT'S NOT citycraft it's Mirugan, also, Endrite is the name for crosses of Endermen and human, this is very short and the tping doesn't work, you also can't be cursed by a dragon and then be given resources too.

[Aura.Blackwind]

Good god I'm not even going to try and correct the errors here. Look at the accepted character bios, then rewrite this whole thing. A half human and half enderman is called an endrite. There is a history for them, and I'd suggest you look at it. As I said earlier, I'd just rewrite this entire thing.

[Rei.Blackwind]

Please go to tinyurl.com/727kn38 and read the post. It will assist you with your bio writing issue here.

[Orman Grandclaw]

I believe that sentences start with a capital letter? Surely you must have at least gathered that crucial bit of information about european languages sometime in the last 38 years?

[sirveleno]

Fix your commas. I can't stand seeing commas with no spaces between words!

[33rob]

Ok you need to fix all of these run-on's. You are use "and" to much. You also have the wrong format. Go and read some of the accepted bios.

[piwii999]

... Well and I have nothing and to say and that anyone hasn't and said already... so and ... what ever...and .... andanndadnadnadnadandadnasihsiuhasdhajd
Sorry my computer got pissed at my bad grammar