Lerisia

[minecraftkitty34]

This is a roleplay character submission, in case you hadn't already figured it out.
So my characters name is Lerisia she is secretly a Water demon and who can shape-shift into a human form and her demon form.
She is a Hunter who carries around various knives with her and comes from The Cattivian Isles, far away from the city she resides in now. She moved to Rull to escape her cruel father who happens to be the king of her old home who tormented her and would've forced her to marry.

Um... ok I guess thats I all i could really think of on the spot,

[elkanman]

First it is a very short bio and stopping it in the middle kinda seems a little weird. Also the idea that your parents want you to marry someone you don't love seems over rated and distracting from the demon idea.

Also, you need to have a first and last name. not just Lerisia

Good Luck!

[33rob]

The format on this is wrong and Like Elkanman said it is to short. You will have to make it longer of you want this to be accepted.

[piwii999]

OK so before all the mods go ape **** and own your face some quick tips.
-GO here!!! ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptbios
-AND here ( this is my recently accepted bio A few of people liked it so ...) ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=acceptbios&thread=1864&page=1
- Uhhhh add weaknesses like maybe she is vulnerable to uhhh... lava or something just make yourself less OP.
- make me MOAR BEEF !!!!
-Fix the title to your FULL name
-put it in perspective this gives your character more personality.

That is all and ... be afraid be very afraid as the storm of BEEF WILL COME !!!!

[Orman Grandclaw]

I' ll just put this situation into perspective. This piece is to be handed into your most horrible, sadistic and detention-happy teacher.

[Rei.Blackwind]

I needs more work kitty.... although! I am happy to see you are back on and playing!! Read some of the accepted bios and try to add more to it. Also keep in mind, you can't do anything in roleplay that you can't actually do in the game. That would be godmodding.