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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2012 17:55:06 GMT -5
Alright. I will remove le derpy army stuff. Total overhall soon...
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Post by Deleted on Jun 27, 2012 21:22:16 GMT -5
Ria, My honest opinion is that you are trying to make it too big. It would have been better as a small town specializing in a trade with a rich heritage in said trade, but now you have it all massive with an army and crap. It's really turned me off from the idea. Plus with the new map, each kingdom will be on a continent, and I can assure you that you will not be getting one. I knew the continent thing was true xD and i am redoing this post extensively.
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Post by piwii999 on Jun 27, 2012 21:49:42 GMT -5
ria just a tip there is no point building anything until this gets accepted as the next map update they will destroy all unregistered towns
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Post by Deleted on Jun 28, 2012 9:48:47 GMT -5
Ik that, i have been building on SSP seeing what I want the town to look like.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2012 19:21:26 GMT -5
I updated the sizes and price of a home in the city. I figured 20x30 wouldn't be that big. i was way wrong lol
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2012 22:35:44 GMT -5
So wait who accepts the town bios??? And what do you do after the town is accepted?
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Post by piwii999 on Jul 2, 2012 1:57:04 GMT -5
You know what I think I would like to join this town when it gets accepted... Just don't tell rhian... shh
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2012 5:34:27 GMT -5
xD alright
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Jul 2, 2012 11:57:13 GMT -5
Admins have to accept. RP mods can provide input though. Once accepted, admin would set up towny for you.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Jul 2, 2012 12:02:54 GMT -5
Oh and the revisions look a little better, but what will happen since you are ditching your other character? Also, you should REALLY take out the kingdom part in the title and anywhere else. His name and nord stuff is in it... I saw something else that looked off. I can reread and post on that after you make more revisions.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2012 17:19:12 GMT -5
Alright. BTW the reason that Bio-ish bit was there is because I wanted to show how he got there. I will edit that part up a bit and make it less bio-ish. xD
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2012 17:52:57 GMT -5
So I added a bit and removed bio-ish stuff. Added the alignment and a note too about it too! Hopefully My town is accepted soon. Also since Strolinghae Agrae is... dying... my new character will replace him in an orderly 2 day process
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Post by James.Sanderson on Jul 3, 2012 19:50:29 GMT -5
All right... Cornilius or whatever his name is better be alot like Stroling or he will DIE!!! Jk jk. See ya when I get unbanned
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2012 23:26:45 GMT -5
All right... Cornilius or whatever his name is better be alot like Stroling or he will DIE!!! Jk jk. See ya when I get unbanned Its Conveilius Branchia. He is a good Breton. Trust me. Plus he can fly an airship quite well. Even has one of his own
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2012 11:04:28 GMT -5
Made some grammar updates and a few rewordings
Also a poll xD
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