Under my mask

[vexxcapez]

This is a poem I have based off of Rorujo, being the true king of Rull but not claiming the crown.

Under my mask of stone I am no different than any other
Under my mask I am troubled like any other man
Under my mask I have feelings... somewhere
Under my mask I wonder, why me?
Under my mask I know I'm doomed to die a slow, horrible death
Under my mask worries fill my mind and heart
Under my mask I felt the blade with my father
Under my mask I am ripped in half
Under my mask I hunger for the blood of the evil
Under my mask I crave to avenge my people
Under my mask I greave over the dead of Rull
Under my mask I am terrified to do what I must
Under my mask I am only Rorujo
Under my mask Rorujo Rull does not exist

[ventuskb]

My favourite poem. And that's saying something, going out with a writer.

[Orman Grandclaw]

Very effective use of repetition suggests the constant hiding of the persona.

[sirveleno]

Very nice metaphor. Makes us see the poem in a different way.

[deltajesus]

Mar 19, 2012 6:19:05 GMT -5 Orman Grandclaw said:

Very effective use of repetition suggests the constant hiding of the persona.

Oh god I'm having flashbacks about war poetry comparison essays.

[Orman Grandclaw]

Im doing english lit. for GCE. And I rock at it