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Post by vamplord3214 on Apr 3, 2012 20:38:28 GMT -5
The Knight from the frozen wastes, Kaigon Blorian. Born in a graveyard from undead i became a warrior because my father made me fight for the undead armys.The Armor i wear was my Undead Gaurdians, Before he died in the 3d war between the Undead And The Humans.I have been in 4 wars wich took 6 years.I stole a sword from the undead and joined the humans but when i use it i turn into an undead DragonKnight.Bound To Become Lord of the Humans some day.......
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Post by pajosftw on Apr 3, 2012 20:47:14 GMT -5
I can tell you right now, denied. These have to be stories. Go into the "accepted character bios" section for examples of how it needs to be. Make it interesting, a decent length, an actual story (not just a timeline), and make sure not to godmod. Good luck!
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 3, 2012 20:48:32 GMT -5
wow... just.... no.... I had thought i saw the worst bio the other day... i was wrong... put some effort into it....
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Shawn Benoit
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Post by Shawn Benoit on Apr 3, 2012 21:21:52 GMT -5
This looks like a crappy version of my very first bio.
Oh yeah, and what pajos said.
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Post by minea on Apr 4, 2012 1:51:19 GMT -5
Yea mate needs a little work... well a lot of work and i agree with pajos on this one dont act like a god, it just makes people uninterested
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Post by sirveleno on Apr 4, 2012 3:16:49 GMT -5
Look at the Roleplay history of the towns and the server. Then compare it to yours. Now after that, rewrite. Sorry if this sounded offensive but no offense.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on Apr 4, 2012 9:59:43 GMT -5
Your english teacher would flay you alive if you handed this in to him/her. It's no different here.
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 4, 2012 11:44:40 GMT -5
It's not english teachers they should worry about if they have poor english on aoc.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 7, 2012 16:15:05 GMT -5
Yeah, please take a look at our server lore and see if you can incorporate yourself into it some how. This is a bit god mod and doesn't really fit in at all. Please try again.  Use the modify button at the top right of your post to make some changes and let us know! Also change the topic of the post to the name of your character. Please use the modify button at the top right of your post! Good luck! |
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 7, 2012 16:18:20 GMT -5
Damnit, I was clicking recent topic titles on the main page, and wound up back here. I should been more careful. It still repels me.
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Use the modify button at the top right of your post to make some changes and let us know! Also change the topic of the post to the name of your character. Please use the modify button at the top right of your post! Good luck!