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Post by 1000degrees on Apr 5, 2012 15:53:30 GMT -5
Name: Dar Ri
Race: Khajiit
Story: Came from Elsweyr to Citycraft to find a new life. He has escaped many creatures of Skyrim to come to Citycraft. His ancestors are traders, he knows how do work a business but is more of a leader and a worrier than anything. But he will work hard to be at the top. But one more important thing, he is the dragon born.
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Post by alwayzbored114 on Apr 5, 2012 16:01:34 GMT -5
Mkay. Another Newb :b A few things: A) On AoC, you cannot blatently copy things like Skyrim. You can, however, be influenced/inspired by outside sources, but dont use things by name. B ) The world we live in is called Mirugan, not Citycraft C) Read some other bios. Most of the really good ones have an entire story to them. Here are some: www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptbios&action=display&thread=941 and www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptbios&action=display&thread=558D) With the whole Dragon Born thing; Dont place your character at such a high status from the beginning. Start out with something smaller, and work your way up through actual gameplay and character development. Not only does this help us have a more diverse group of Role Players, but it lets you change your character over time, not stuck with being one thing. And dont under estimate how fun being just a normal guy can be. Im the King, which sounds awesome, but it restricts me from just doin average things in RP. I have to be all regal and -Censored- :\ E) Lastly, look at some Server History for imformation about the world. Here: www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=unohis&action=display&thread=956 and www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=unohis&action=display&thread=1208EDIT: This too www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=bios&action=display&thread=580 |
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 5, 2012 16:02:42 GMT -5
This is NOT skyrim, the land is NOT called citycraft, it is called mirugan. Read up on the official history and try not to just copy skyrim.
EDIT: damnit alwayz, just before me yet again.
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Post by alwayzbored114 on Apr 5, 2012 16:05:16 GMT -5
Delta, be easy on him. Its his first day, he doesnt know the rules. Ive been on other servers, and this kind of stuff is allowed on some of them (and they suck cause of it). Unless you pull a Nass0r and have 4 different terrible Bios, then cut them some slack
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Post by Shawn Benoit on Apr 5, 2012 17:12:43 GMT -5
Delta, be easy on him. Its his first day, he doesnt know the rules. Ive been on other servers, and this kind of stuff is allowed on some of them (and they suck cause of it). Unless you pull a Nass0r and have 4 different terrible Bios, then cut them some slack Technically, it was two. |
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 7, 2012 16:10:38 GMT -5
Mkay. Another Newb :b A few things: A) On AoC, you cannot blatently copy things like Skyrim. You can, however, be influenced/inspired by outside sources, but dont use things by name. B ) The world we live in is called Mirugan, not Citycraft C) Read some other bios. Most of the really good ones have an entire story to them. Here are some: www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptbios&action=display&thread=941 and www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptbios&action=display&thread=558D) With the whole Dragon Born thing; Dont place your character at such a high status from the beginning. Start out with something smaller, and work your way up through actual gameplay and character development. Not only does this help us have a more diverse group of Role Players, but it lets you change your character over time, not stuck with being one thing. And dont under estimate how fun being just a normal guy can be. Im the King, which sounds awesome, but it restricts me from just doin average things in RP. I have to be all regal and -Censored- :\ E) Lastly, look at some Server History for imformation about the world. Here: www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=unohis&action=display&thread=956 and www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=unohis&action=display&thread=1208EDIT: This too www.ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=bios&action=display&thread=580 I agree. Once all this is taken care of we will look again and see if we can approve! Good luck sir and be creative! Also make the title of this the name of your character. It will also not be approved if it is not. Please use the modify button at the top right of your post to fix it and let us know! |
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 7, 2012 16:14:22 GMT -5
Idk. My bio didn't have my character name for a title.
Course, I didn't title it character bio either.
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I agree. Once all this is taken care of we will look again and see if we can approve! Good luck sir and be creative! Also make the title of this the name of your character. It will also not be approved if it is not. Please use the modify button at the top right of your post to fix it and let us know!