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uiyot
Apr 5, 2012 23:39:54 GMT -5
Post by uiyot on Apr 5, 2012 23:39:54 GMT -5
Uiyot is a historian, walking to the ends of the world to study the lore and stories of the Giant Land of Minecraftia. He happened to stumble onto this land, and decided to seek the stories and lore of the land.
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severare
Experienced Miner
The model citizen
Posts: 343
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uiyot
Apr 5, 2012 23:47:19 GMT -5
Post by severare on Apr 5, 2012 23:47:19 GMT -5
A couple things.
For starters, the world we live in is not 'minecraftia', but 'Murigan'.
You're going to want to include more about your character, as well. Possibly a last name, where he came from, his profession, why he's in Murigan, amongst a few things.
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uiyot
Apr 5, 2012 23:50:35 GMT -5
Post by pajosftw on Apr 5, 2012 23:50:35 GMT -5
A couple things. For starters, the world we live in is not 'minecraftia', but 'Murigan'. You're going to want to include more about your character, as well. Possibly a last name, where he came from, his profession, why he's in Murigan, amongst a few things. You fail. The world is called Mirugan, not Murigan. |
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Apr 6, 2012 0:22:49 GMT -5
Try looking at the accepted character bios and also, you need an RP name. Not your Ign.
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uiyot
Apr 6, 2012 3:11:55 GMT -5
Post by sirveleno on Apr 6, 2012 3:11:55 GMT -5
Add more action and details. What challenges did he fall into? What was his reason he came to Mirugan? Who is he?
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uiyot
Apr 7, 2012 16:08:17 GMT -5
Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 7, 2012 16:08:17 GMT -5
Yep. This is Mirugan. Fix that.. also there's little to no substance here in this bio. Take a look at some of the accepted bios for examples. Also give some history on your character and where he was from.  Oh and come up with a last name as well. Good luck! |
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Oh and come up with a last name as well. Good luck!