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Post by noyoudontiwan on Apr 9, 2012 20:03:04 GMT -5
My name is Iwan Gwilliam. I come from a small town named Sodimia. My father was a warrior before he was killed by a bear. Needless to say me and by two brothers (Owain and Osian) avenged his death. My mother still cries about it every night according to Osian's letters. Me and Owain no longer live in Sodimia. We wanted to be bigger than that. So we saved up for a boat and now go from place to place in it, exploring. I have been living in a town for the past few months now. I have made some friends there. There is a small church. The reverent is a very nice man, however he only has one eye (Something to do with his brother, Alderon.) Alderon is a nice man. But I regret to say. He is a criminal. Its safe to say he got the looks out of him and his brother. Owain moved on a couple of days ago. I'm not sure where he will end up. But he promises to write.
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 9, 2012 20:07:28 GMT -5
Try throwing in a few connectives to stop it from being this happened. Then this happened. Then this happened. Etc.
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Post by alwayzbored114 on Apr 9, 2012 20:58:41 GMT -5
You talk a lot of your family and your friends, but not much of yourself. Can you please elaborate? Your Hero Class, motives, goals, etc
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 9, 2012 21:31:50 GMT -5
Aye. Talk a little more about yourself. You are heading in the right direction though!
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