Logan Archcaster

[crabonok]

The giant yellow/blue sphere of crackling energy crackled with great power as it hurled with unrelenting force towards planet Earth. Its speed baffled all the top meteoritics. They were even more surprised for it was constantly changing course, as if it were searching for something... or someone. However, Logan was not surprised, for he knew who it was looking for.. him.
For years the Magistos, a powerful group of mages, had been searching for him as he ran from planet to galaxy to solar system. He though he would be safe here, but obviously this huge thundering mass of energy could only mean on thing - the Magistos were back. The weird thing was that Logan was not sure why he was running from them at all. They had promised him proper training, clothes, food, shelter; but for some reason the idea of being a powerful wizard didn't appeal to Logan. Ever since Logan Archcaster first noticed that he possessed the Gargoyle's Touch, his life had changed dramatically and he ran away from home [probably because he use the gargoyle's touch on his parents lol]
He had discovered he could create a portal that would allow him to travel between planets. Oh and he could set people on fire... or freeze them. Anyway back to the present. So yeah, big scary ball o' fire, nothing too big for Logan, right? Or so he thought. The MagistoSpere [lets call it the MagistoSphere] was meters away from Logan now, who had climbed up on a roof so he could deflect it. he summoned his powers of, well, absorption, and created a funnel of energy for the MagistoSphere to flow into.
Just as the MagistoSphere was supposedly about to disintegrate, the sphere stopped, and as casually as a ball of energy could, tractor-beamed Logan into its stomach...
When Logan awoke, the first thing he noticed was the kind face he was staring at. The second thing he noticed was that the face had no body . Then the face spoke, in a booming but kind voice: COME, MY SON, LET ME SHOW YOU AROUND CITYCRAFT
And then he was unconscious again.........

[deltajesus]

The world is Mirugan not citycraft. There's an awful lot of godmodding in this, the setting people on fire with your hands I'm fine with since mages have fireball, the freezing people I'm not sure of since I doubt you've made it to elementalist yet put the power rp travel between worlds is just ridiculous.

[alwayzbored114]

Yea, A few problems with this. First of all, the whole scheme of you being so powerful is usually not accepted in the first place. On AoC, we like people to start thier RP characters not weak babies, but still mortal and normal power levels (not ova 9000) to be fair with other newbs

Secondly, the whole Gargoyle touch is not only Over Powered, but God Modding. If you dont already know, God Modding is acting Over Powered and not letting people do anything about it. On AoC, this usually means people using / me messages to indicate they did something incredible that could not normally be done by anyone in Minecraft. So, might want to rethink that point.

Thirdly, we dont have inter spacial travel. We do have some various realms and worlds, but think of those as more of dimensions/planes of existence rather than mere planets.

Dont get me wrong, we do need more Role Play mages, and will be happy to help you become powerful, but to be fair, please rewrite and be a little more..... possible. Rome was not built in a day, and neither is your character.

[chad]

Apr 9, 2012 20:56:24 GMT -5 alwayzbored114 said:

Yea, A few problems with this. First of all, the whole scheme of you being so powerful is usually not accepted in the first place. On AoC, we like people to start thier RP characters not weak babies, but still mortal and normal power levels (not ova 9000) to be fair with other newbs

Secondly, the whole Gargoyle touch is not only Over Powered, but God Modding. If you dont already know, God Modding is acting Over Powered and not letting people do anything about it. On AoC, this usually means people using /me messages to indicate they did something incredible that could not normally be done by anyone in Minecraft. So, might want to rethink that point.

Thirdly, we dont have inter spacial travel. We do have some various realms and worlds, but think of those as more of dimensions/planes of existence rather than mere planets.

Dont get me wrong, we do need more Role Play mages, and will be happy to help you become powerful, but to be fair, please rewrite and be a little more..... possible. Rome was not built in a day, and neither is your character.

Yes, I recall it took Matt several days to build Rome.

[crabonok]

This was not an account of what Logan did on the server its what happened that brought him here. The unconcousness at the end and the first sign at spawn fits perfectly. Also When he was unconcious he lost some power.

[alwayzbored114]

Well, what happens in your past defines you as a person. If you were all bad-arse, then whats to stop you from acting so later? And the whole "Lost power when unconcious" is just a plot scheme for conviniance. Although this is a slightly entertaining story, we're looking for not something not just good, but useable.

Also, as I often say, being low powered is a blessing. It lets you train as a character, and grow. Your not bound to your commitment as an epic mage (if we let you be), you can change over time to accomodate for new happenings.

Like I said, im not looking for a huge remodel, just to lower your power, understand? Good Luck, ill be looking forward to reading the revised version We need more Role Play Mages!

[crabonok]

ok ill change it when i get the chance

[Aura.Blackwind]

Apr 9, 2012 21:28:00 GMT -5 chad said:

Apr 9, 2012 20:56:24 GMT -5 alwayzbored114 said:

Yea, A few problems with this. First of all, the whole scheme of you being so powerful is usually not accepted in the first place. On AoC, we like people to start thier RP characters not weak babies, but still mortal and normal power levels (not ova 9000) to be fair with other newbs

Secondly, the whole Gargoyle touch is not only Over Powered, but God Modding. If you dont already know, God Modding is acting Over Powered and not letting people do anything about it. On AoC, this usually means people using /me messages to indicate they did something incredible that could not normally be done by anyone in Minecraft. So, might want to rethink that point.

Thirdly, we dont have inter spacial travel. We do have some various realms and worlds, but think of those as more of dimensions/planes of existence rather than mere planets.

Dont get me wrong, we do need more Role Play mages, and will be happy to help you become powerful, but to be fair, please rewrite and be a little more..... possible. Rome was not built in a day, and neither is your character.

Yes, I recall it took Matt several days to build Rome.

I'm pretty sure he was talking about the roman empire...

[Rei.Blackwind]

Yep... exactly as Alwayz said. Couldn't have said it any better! Good luck with the revisions.