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Post by rejcops on Apr 10, 2012 11:42:06 GMT -5
I was a young boy from aefor (a village in north) I was walking around in a forest with a crossbow to get me some food at the night. When I came into the center of forest, some angry wolfs attacked me. I grab my little dagger i got from my best friend the day before, I tryed to kill it, but the wolf was to fast and I had no arrows for my crossbow. everything got black. I waked up 2 weeks later in a little hut in the forest. It was a elf family that saved me from the wolfes. They said to me that I had been sleeping in 2 weeks. I was a little assassin boy, nobode knew I was. Only my father and my mother.
Ten years later.
I still lived with the elfs, I was going to say goodbye to them. I was planning to get back home.
They gave me some stuffs that they had for years, it had belong to an assassin that died right outside their hut.
It was a small tiny blade/dagger, a sword, 15 throwing knifes and a 15 cm long dagger. they also gave me a strong crossbow with 50 arrows. They also gave me a horse to get fast home before night come.
When I was only 100 meter away from my home village I could see wath was had happend there. The hole village was burned down and noone was there. I started shouth "Anyone here!!? Anyone!?" but i didnt hear anyone, the houses still burned. It could been long time ago before the some evil men burned it down.
It was then I started understand that the adventure started and all the risks came, it was the hole beginning!
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 10, 2012 14:13:31 GMT -5
Ok. There's some spelling and grammar errors. May want to run this through a spell checker. We really don't have crossbows in the game, but it's basically the same as a bow... so I don't really see a big issue with that. Um... we don't have any horses. So that should be fixed. Otherwise, it could work. Maybe elaborate a little more about yourself. You claim that you were an "assassin boy" but why is that? Just woke up and decided to be an assassin kid? Plus, we have a guild that does crime stuff including assassinations. :x If you plan to continue being an "assassin" after your began adventuring, you could try to find them and join up.
Also, we need a first and last name for your character. And please make it the title of your post. The bio will be in the incorrect format otherwise and denied.
Please use the modify button at the top right of your post to make adjustments there.
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Post by rejcops on Apr 11, 2012 8:07:06 GMT -5
the first thing, i used the spell checker.
its ok that it can be a bow not an crossbow, the thing with horses, just use a pig with saddle XD
But should i make a new topic or just make this bigger with one hole new?
and can u reply my fast?
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 11, 2012 9:56:48 GMT -5
There's still some possibly typing errors and a few errors with grammar so run it through the spellchecker on the forums and see if that helps with it. Also just because a pig has a saddle on it it doesn't make it a horse, stop being smart and listen to what Aku said and use a pig to ride into battle or something.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 11, 2012 12:41:20 GMT -5
the first thing, i used the spell checker. its ok that it can be a bow not an crossbow, the thing with horses, just use a pig with saddle XD But should i make a new topic or just make this bigger with one hole new? and can u reply my fast? Wolfs should be wolves. "waked up" should be woke up. Nobode should be nobody. Elfs should be elves. "wath was had happend" ... I don't know what you were going for... I assume "what had happened" is it. Hole should be whole. Two different meanings on those words. Look them up in a Dictionary. Don't be smartass fyi. Use the modify button at the top right. And a pig with a saddle is NOT a horse. It is a pig. |
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Post by rejcops on Apr 11, 2012 12:50:29 GMT -5
well, a pig with a saddle is the animal on minecraft that is the closest thing u can come to an horse, so..... ? wath should it be then? it is no horses on minecraft!
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Post by rejcops on Apr 11, 2012 12:51:22 GMT -5
i just use a texture pack, the pig is a horse!
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Post by Shawn Benoit on Apr 11, 2012 13:35:00 GMT -5
Smartass.
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Post by Micah Keyshin on Apr 11, 2012 13:49:45 GMT -5
Title format is incorrect.
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 11, 2012 14:11:56 GMT -5
I think he should be permanently pigified.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 11, 2012 16:36:54 GMT -5
Title format is incorrect. LoL. I pointed that out too Mikey. If you continue to argue and not make the changes requested, you will NOT get approved. It's as simple as that. Fix it or shut up. |
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Post by Shawn Benoit on Apr 11, 2012 17:23:08 GMT -5
Also just because a pig has a saddle on it it doesn't make it a horse, stop being smart and listen to what Aku said and use a pig to ride into battle or something. You can do that? |
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 11, 2012 18:03:33 GMT -5
Also just because a pig has a saddle on it it doesn't make it a horse, stop being smart and listen to what Aku said and use a pig to ride into battle or something. You can do that? Technically yes, but I'm not saying it's a good idea. |
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