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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 13, 2012 12:54:44 GMT -5
gee, what a surprise. you were an abused child who lived with a family that was not your own (see every sixth profile, OR Harry potter) your village was wiped out by zombies, (See any third bio in here) and you fought them off yourself despite having no former combat training.(See every three out of four of the former bios referenced). you then got knocked out and woke up in a mysterious place that happened to be Rull. (See every five bios)
to be brutally honest, this is about as generic as a profile can get. you've even got the vengful orphan thing going. i'm going to take a guess, and say this is your first profile in any sort of roleplay. by the way, you need to have your roleplay name in here somewhere if you still intend to go with it.
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Post by bornspaz on Apr 13, 2012 13:44:31 GMT -5
yea it was a first run your right it was overused ima try to be more creative
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 13, 2012 13:56:07 GMT -5
Dang Mav.. that was kind of harsh! I would have said that a bit nicer. :< Comments that harsh may drive new players away, dawg. Chillax. But yeah.. I believe he deleted his post so I don't know what it said originally, but try a little creativity! I'm tired of vengeful orphans. :<
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Post by bornspaz on Apr 13, 2012 14:01:44 GMT -5
yea i did lol ik it was a first run and i wanted feed back now ik what not to include
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