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Post by alisinathegreat on Apr 13, 2012 19:10:05 GMT -5
My name Regner Shadows. its known to the dark and feared by the light. just a nickname really but its what i did to cause the fear. It all started 15 years ago when i was 10. Me and my father were gone chopping wood like always, we needed the money. My was an old general who retired after the war. Even tho he had fame we were low on riches. he teached me how to use the sword and the bow and always warned me to block. We had a good life, we lived alone and far from the towns. We were always on the move though and we acted as merchants this way bought something from here and sold it there. one day on the way to the capital, Mirugan, my dad tensed, slowly turned around and faintly whispered "I Love You, Run" I did as i was told and turned and ran. about 2 minuets later i heard swords clashing and my dads scream. I promised myself revenge. Days after running i found an old cottage. it seemed empty so i went in everything was dark and suddenly i was grabbed from behind and carried to and unknown place. There i they took of my blindfold and i found my self in a cavern surrounded by men in black. The oldest one said to me "Welcome Regner we have been looking for you. We know you seek revenge and were here to help you. We have some skills to teach and books for you to read. Here we will teach you to be stealthy and silent. here we will teach you how to use everything to your advantage. Here we will teach you how to kill. Hope you like my story
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 14, 2012 11:57:02 GMT -5
There's a part a few sentences in where it says "My was an old general..." I assume this was supposed to be "My dad" heh. There are also a few instances were the first word of a sentence was not capitalized. There are also a few spelling errors. This is a little more original than some bios I have been receiving lately, although it still DOES incorporate some aspects that are the same... Why must everyone be a vengeful orphan?! There must be a lot of parent killers out there. That's it! I am changing my bio to being a nasty parent killing robot! >.> (I kid, I kid.) But yeah, fix the mistakes and we'll talk.
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