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Post by xxm0nst3rxx on Apr 14, 2012 18:21:13 GMT -5
The mage Gyland Phoenix fights daily to protect his village. one day, in his house, he had looked outside and saw the town in chains everyone imprisoned by the evil lord Habrian Madeaux and he saves his village and the dark lord is imprisoned in his cell, untill now he roams the street, dead in chains.
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Apr 14, 2012 18:24:20 GMT -5
Good job on getting the format right, but check some of the accepted character bios. It needs to be longer!
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Post by alwayzbored114 on Apr 14, 2012 21:09:57 GMT -5
Uhh, yea. The Bio has potential, but its 2 sentenses XD Give a bit more backround, and maybe how you ended up in Rull.
Trust me, your well off. We need good RP Mages, so you usually have it easier getting accepted, just expand on it a bit? Good Luck!
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