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BIO
Apr 14, 2012 19:40:41 GMT -5
Post by code on Apr 14, 2012 19:40:41 GMT -5
Zook.LaMosano
Zook.LaMosano was born and raised in the swampy marshes of (insert swampy marsh name here). He was taken from his mother at birth. The kidnapper left him in the (same swampy area as above). There he was found by a ranger and trained in his ways. He dreams that one day he can return to his rightful home in (same swampy area as above). He has wandered the land ever since. The night before he was in a small village and awoke groggily. So he decided to look for a town, for he could no longer keep searching for his homeland, too many incidents like this one. A man found Zook.LaMosano with broken legs, deep cuts, and alarmingly infected gashes on his left leg and back. Suddenly Zook.LaMosano awoke and thought he was screaming a started swinging and flailing his arms wildly until the nurse calmed him down. He then talked to the man who found him. The man’s name was Jeremy Croutch. He had been looking for herbs to sell to the hospital, when suddenly he heard a loud and ear splitting scream. He ran towards it and saw a large creature that looked like a being of the End and Nether crossed. It had its back turned to him, so he through a small rock off to his left. The monster perked its head up and chased the noise. Jeremy then grabbed the poor individual and took him to Rull giving him to the hospital there.
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Apr 14, 2012 19:41:39 GMT -5
The format is wrong. Use the modify button to change the title of the thread to the name of your character.
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BIO
Apr 15, 2012 12:32:56 GMT -5
Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 15, 2012 12:32:56 GMT -5
Yep, as Nightslash said, fix the title. Also, Mirkwood is kind of swampy... That might work.
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