Post by deltajesus on Apr 14, 2012 20:21:12 GMT -5
Your name should be the title of the topic. It's also very short and contains almost no information about who your character is other than that they're the last one of a group of ninjas which brings me on to the fact that it's not a very original story and it Judy's blends in to all the rest. You need to add more detail about who you are and what you did. I don't mean add that you went somewhere once I mean you need a lot more, read a couple bios like nightslash's under the accepted bios section to see what you need to add.
