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Post by megasoar on Apr 15, 2012 9:45:52 GMT -5
ING: megasoar Role play name: Fogi Race: Dwarf Back story: when Fogi was young a couple of bandits took his sword. But Fogi's sword had the highest enchantment you could ever get...Fogi chased the bandits then passed out because he was so tired. When Fogi woke up he was in a forest.......Fogi was lost he never found his way back to his village but when he was walking he found AgeOfCitycraft and never left. Since Fogi was away from other dwarfs so long he began to change, now Fogi is not too fat and is fast, Fogi is not mean and he is not nice. Now Fogi still looks for his sword but he has a few friends to help. Read more: ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=rpjrc&thread=1515#ixzz1s7Yb05U8
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on Apr 15, 2012 10:12:39 GMT -5
ok, first of all, neither the city, nor the world is known as AgeOfCitycraft, the main capitol your likely to be in is Rull, which is the one spawn is in, and the world is known as mirugan. you also need more of pretty much everthing, detail, general info on your character, so on, so forth. you also need a last name, and so you know, all we get from this is that your character lost an epic sword, no stamina, a horrible sense of direction, and is absolutely average in every way shape and form.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 15, 2012 16:11:15 GMT -5
LoL... Mav is right. The title of the thread should also be the first and last name of your character. Please use the modify button at the top right of your post to make the corrections. Let us know and we will review it again!
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