Gabriel.Forpan the elf (revision)

[partonetrain]

So, I'm new to this server, and I thought I'd better submit a charachter. This is a revision, so please ignore the posts that where posted before I revised.

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Race: Elf

I'm not just an elf.

I'm Gabriel Forpan the elf.

Story: Gabriel is a teen elf, who is interested in magic.
He speaks English and of course Quenya.
He will go wherever he's told, (He has brains, though, he won't jump off a cliff just because someone told him to) and do whatever he's told to do. And yet, he's not sure why he's who he is. He has alot of stuff to learn about himself; he can't remember the things that happened before.

"I just... can't remember...."

He's always been interested in magic (but mostly potions)
He is very knowlogeable about magic, too.

With his signature bow, he will thrive in the Age Of Citycraft.


He's heard of this town named Endercity, and he would like to live there.

Can he live in Endercity?
What will happen to him?
Will he survive?

These questions can only be answered if you allow him into Age of Citycraft!

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If this is not accepted, please tell me what's wrong with it. Thanks.

[partonetrain]

PS,
should I change my skin?

[Orman Grandclaw]

You are advised to extend the word-count of this text by a factor of aproximately 10. You are also advised to read the AOC Bestiary written by me with contributions by other people that will give you more information on the Elves. Look in the Unofficial section to find it. If you are at loss at what a Bio should look like, please direct your attention towards some of the Bios in the accepted section to obtain examples. Bios written by nightlash are a particually good read.

[Aura.Blackwind]

Yeah, if possible I'm sure everyone would like story on your character as well.

[deltajesus]

EC doesn't accept new players anymore as a general rule.

[partonetrain]

I revised it, so can someone please read it again?

[deltajesus]

ageofcitycraft.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=rp&thread=1530&page=1
2, 3, 7 and 9 apply, take a look at the accepted bios. Also, I can answer the question about whether you can live in EC. Currently it's a no, when you've established a name for yourself and become a player that we know probably won't just stop playing on aoc anytime soon we'll give it another thought.

[alwayzbored114]

If you are an Elf person, you should speak to Sbongkh. He runs Mirkwood, the Elven (mostly Wood Elf, but all elves are welcome) Town.

[Rei.Blackwind]

Yeah.. Mirkwood would probably be a better fit. Not knowing who you were is fine, but a little more info would be good. Also the world is called Mirugan, not Age of Citycraft. LoL. Nightslash had amnesia too but was able to still do a little flashback or something to give her character some history.