Post by deltajesus on Apr 16, 2012 15:19:48 GMT -5
This is just a little idea I had to save time while correcting minor errors in a bio, just because I'm so lazy. Incase anyone's wondering, I'm gonna put a link to this thread and say which ones apply to a bio, thus saving lots of time typing for me (hopefully).
Jesus's generic list of things wrong with your bio:
1. This isn't halo.
2. You really need more information about:
---A. Your characters background.
---B. Where you went, and what you did
---C. What you character's like.
3. It needs to be longer, try adding description of the places you went etc.
4. There's godmodding, you have to be able to do ingame what you can in your bio.
5. This REALLY isn't halo.
6. You need to fix your grammar.
7. You need to fix your spelling, try using the spellchecker on the forums.
8. You need to fix being a vengeful orphan not from AOVO.
9. The world is called Mirugan, not citycraft or minecraftia.
10. Incorrect format, the title of the thread needs to be the name of your character.
11. There isn't a name.
12. You need a proper name, and not just a title like lord, or general, etc.
13. You need a first name.
14. You are not the worlds greatest assassin, that is zigggy, fix it or be "visited" by the crime syndicate.
15. You haven't used the modify button.
16. You've used text speak.
17. This isn't starcraft.
18. This isn't bloody assassins creed, stop trying to make it into assassins creed.
19. Come on man, this is obviously just a game of dance mats, you need to show me your moves.
20. THIS IS NOT SKYRIM! It just looks like it is.
21. This isn't star trek... Seriously how did anyone even think that?
22. That huge catastrophic war you mentioned? Yeah... that never happened.
23. Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries.
24. This isn't bleach or naruto and you can't have a huge sword to compensate for anything.
25. You are alive, please fix this.
Jesus's generic list of things wrong with your bio:
1. This isn't halo.
2. You really need more information about:
---A. Your characters background.
---B. Where you went, and what you did
---C. What you character's like.
3. It needs to be longer, try adding description of the places you went etc.
4. There's godmodding, you have to be able to do ingame what you can in your bio.
5. This REALLY isn't halo.
6. You need to fix your grammar.
7. You need to fix your spelling, try using the spellchecker on the forums.
8. You need to fix being a vengeful orphan not from AOVO.
9. The world is called Mirugan, not citycraft or minecraftia.
10. Incorrect format, the title of the thread needs to be the name of your character.
11. There isn't a name.
12. You need a proper name, and not just a title like lord, or general, etc.
13. You need a first name.
14. You are not the worlds greatest assassin, that is zigggy, fix it or be "visited" by the crime syndicate.
15. You haven't used the modify button.
16. You've used text speak.
17. This isn't starcraft.
18. This isn't bloody assassins creed, stop trying to make it into assassins creed.
19. Come on man, this is obviously just a game of dance mats, you need to show me your moves.
20. THIS IS NOT SKYRIM! It just looks like it is.
21. This isn't star trek... Seriously how did anyone even think that?
22. That huge catastrophic war you mentioned? Yeah... that never happened.
23. Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries.
24. This isn't bleach or naruto and you can't have a huge sword to compensate for anything.
25. You are alive, please fix this.
