character submission

[midghtsniper]

Name: midghtsniper
RPN: reliys
Species: Cross of Human & Dwarf
Home town: gnowmergan
Speciality: warrior

Reliys was born in a small dwarven town like all other dwarves he loved alchol and diggy diggy holes everywhere then he got on a boat to Rull!He had many other misadventures soooooo this is not alot about the dwarf but we might one day finally get him too open his journals and wright down an accurate history also reliys had a brother

[deltajesus]

This bio is.... bouncy, I haven't got a clue how you've done it but I imagine you were bouncing off the walls while you wrote it.

Onto being serious though I suppose. You need a lot more information about who your character is, and what they're like since this is way too short. The format is also incorrect and you ought to have a last name too (not necessary, just preferred). You also need to sort out the capitalization of various words.

EDIT: Don't forget to use the modify button in the top right to make any changes.

[Rei.Blackwind]

So.... yeah. OK. Firstly, the title of the bio needs to be your character's name.. the one you want to be renamed to. You also need more info here. It kind of bounces around and doesn't really tell a good story about your character. Give us more beef! OH and you should come up with a last name too.