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Post by morphexer on Apr 24, 2012 18:51:13 GMT -5
IGN: Morphexer
Xavier Stonesmith Had A Harsh Life Ever since he was a child. His parents were murdered, and his only brother David, went into hiding. Xavier, Now Almost going into shelter himself, because of the fear of the attacker coming to get him now. Xavier is a fierce fighter, and is well trained with the sword. And is a natural trained survivor. He now is on a quest to find his brother and to find his parents attacker, But, he is homeless, and has yet to find a place to settle. He is starting to learn The Magic of The Priests/ Dark Priests. He now thinks h's found somewhere to settle in Rull City.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on Apr 25, 2012 9:29:28 GMT -5
I stopped reading as soon as I got to the part about murdered parents. Another cliche member for AOVO here... But in all due seriousness, extend the word count and give us MOAR BEEF, tell me more about the character's personality, appearance, beliefs, sexual fantasies, anything. Aku is real nice to people who insult the art of writing, but I can assure you that if this was your English homework assignment, the detention room be the easiest place to find you.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 25, 2012 15:11:36 GMT -5
I am going to kill myself if I have to keep reading about orphans and murdered parents. Seriously. Do something else and provide more details.
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