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Post by thejonc95 on Apr 24, 2012 22:42:06 GMT -5
there isn't much to the story of a runabout, no matter where this certain runabout is from...
This particular runabout had a fighter's childhood. losing his family to a family of rogues at a young age, he since then trained himself to become a great warrior and to one day seek revenge for his brothers and parents.
he one day found what he was looking for. in a pub just east of the heights, he found himself looking into the eyes of the three rogues that ended his childhood, and one young accomplice. they were robbing this pub and causing havok in the towns nearby. knowing it would make a threatening, yet heroic name for himself; he cut all all three of them through, leaving the young boy to run off and tell of the story.
Glider has recently been wondering out in the wilderness, and if his enemies are able to find his hideout, they wont live to tell the tale of it. He is a wanderer -- hence the name he was given by towns he would pass through. Glider. he glides through towns neither making trouble or making business. just simply passing through. the only thing people fear of him is the wonder they have of what he will do next, or what he wouldn't. people of passing villages attempt as much as possible to stay out of his way, but Glider helps when help is needed, and destroys when the enemy is present...
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on Apr 25, 2012 9:34:20 GMT -5
there isn't much to the story of a runabout, no matter where this certain runabout is from... This particular runabout had a fighter's childhood. losing his family to a family of rogues at a young age, he since then trained himself to become a great warrior and to one day seek revenge for his brothers and parents.he one day found what he was looking for. in a pub just east of the heights, he found himself looking into the eyes of the three rogues that ended his childhood, and one young accomplice. they were robbing this pub and causing havok in the towns nearby. knowing it would make a threatening, yet heroic name for himself; he cut all all three of them through, leaving the young boy to run off and tell of the story. Glider has recently been wondering out in the wilderness, and if his enemies are able to find his hideout, they wont live to tell the tale of it. He is a wanderer -- hence the name he was given by towns he would pass through. Glider. he glides through towns neither making trouble or making business. just simply passing through. the only thing people fear of him is the wonder they have of what he will do next, or what he wouldn't. people of passing villages attempt as much as possible to stay out of his way, but Glider helps when help is needed, and destroys when the enemy is present... # I have highlighted the part of the story that is in most need for removal and reconsideration. Additionally, Do try to capitalize words at the beginning of the sentences would you? Thats one of the first rules you learn about writing sentences at the age of 5. |
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 25, 2012 15:13:49 GMT -5
Htshufchffvjgddukuygfdhkgddhigcn loving parent murder and revenge again. I hate life. My give up! /wrists
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Post by deltajesus on Apr 25, 2012 15:22:18 GMT -5
Can you not just make a rule against being a vengeful orphan?
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Apr 25, 2012 16:33:51 GMT -5
Htshufchffvjgddukuygfdhkgddhigcn loving parent murder and revenge again. I hate life. My give up! /wrists I thought it was normal for synthetics to dislike/hate life? On a slightly more related topic, I agree. AOVO is filled to the ceilings now.... |
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Post by naqu6 on Apr 25, 2012 18:06:01 GMT -5
there isn't much to the story of a runabout, no matter where this certain runabout is from... This particular runabout had a fighter's childhood. losing his family to a family of rogues at a young age, he since then trained himself to become a great warrior and to one day seek revenge for his brothers and parents.he one day found what he was looking for. in a pub just east of the heights, he found himself looking into the eyes of the three rogues that ended his childhood, and one young accomplice. they were robbing this pub and causing havok in the towns nearby. knowing it would make a threatening, yet heroic name for himself; he cut all all three of them through, leaving the young boy to run off and tell of the story. Glider has recently been wondering out in the wilderness, and if his enemies are able to find his hideout, they wont live to tell the tale of it. He is a wanderer -- hence the name he was given by towns he would pass through. Glider. he glides through towns neither making trouble or making business. just simply passing through. the only thing people fear of him is the wonder they have of what he will do next, or what he wouldn't. people of passing villages attempt as much as possible to stay out of his way, but Glider helps when help is needed, and destroys when the enemy is present... # I have highlighted the part of the story that is in most need for removal and reconsideration. Additionally, Do try to capitalize words at the beginning of the sentences would you? Thats one of the first rules you learn about writing sentences at the age of 5. yes i agree.Please make your grammar/spelling/punctuation better than mine(mine sucks). |
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Apr 25, 2012 18:18:05 GMT -5
# I have highlighted the part of the story that is in most need for removal and reconsideration. Additionally, Do try to capitalize words at the beginning of the sentences would you? Thats one of the first rules you learn about writing sentences at the age of 5. yes i agree.Please make your grammar/spelling/punctuation better than mine(mine sucks). Then fix it already. It isn't that hard to use the freaking space bar. |
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