noburst
Noob
History repeats itself, first as tragedy, second as farce. -Karl Marx
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Post by noburst on Apr 25, 2012 15:23:42 GMT -5
Noburst was born on a farm, but when he was seventeen his family was butchered by Vampires. He barely escaped, but he was bitten by one of them. His strength grew and he eventually hunted down the vampire clan and burnt them. He became a very successful business man. He became very rich, until his company went bankrupt. Now he had insufficient funds to hide his vampirism. He fled his homeland, betrayed by his closest friends and now he has come to start a new life, even if he has to deceive, run or even kill to do it.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on Apr 25, 2012 15:32:35 GMT -5
*Sigh-no more murdered parents please GOD. Also-do bother to read some server lore before you make up stories about races. It is highly unlikely that you would have killed a clan of Vampires because:
-They don't organise their society in "clans"
-Theres not that many Vampires left
-Even the weakest Vampire can kill a fully armed human with bare hands, you really wanna mess with them?
Additionally, we want to see MOAR BEEF. This bio explains nothing about your character's personality, appearance, anything.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Apr 25, 2012 19:28:19 GMT -5
Orman pretty much summed it up. Fix it and we'll try again!
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Post by Mackenzie.Heinzer on Apr 26, 2012 11:20:53 GMT -5
Thats not a name. Nuff said.
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