xgames721
Novice
nods at the bird people die....
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Post by xgames721 on May 2, 2012 17:01:32 GMT -5
his name is aether he comes from a small town his age is 12 he ran away finding rull city he likes it at rull so he stays and finds a town so now he just explores he is a mage to
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 2, 2012 18:22:17 GMT -5
Incorrect format, and just awful in general. Check some of the accepted character bios.
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Post by minea on May 2, 2012 22:50:11 GMT -5
To be honest this looks like you wrote it in 12 seconds. Its absoultuely awful even for a first try mate. Look at some of the accepted char bios. But good luck
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Post by Lunair.Blackwind on May 3, 2012 0:44:26 GMT -5
this is in the wrong place too.
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