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Post by ewils on May 2, 2012 19:08:29 GMT -5
I am just your ordinary, every-day mage ( i like using frost spells), and I am completely and utterly insane. Don't try to make sense of me doing anything odd. Just ignore me. I am also severely random, which, when combined with my insanity, can be either a disastrous thing, or a wonderful, brilliant thing.
Usually its just an insane thing.
Like when i decided to come to Rull!
I actually came to rull because i just wanted some adventure in my life, and Rull was the place to go in this day and age!
I do not remember who my mother or father is or if i even had one of each... Eh! i'll figure it out later. in the meantime....
ADVENTURE!!
~The insanity-man~
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 2, 2012 19:34:19 GMT -5
I'd suggest you look through the accepted character bios and try again. What made your character come to Rull? What's their back story? Ect. Also use the modify button at the top right to make any changes.
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Post by deltajesus on May 2, 2012 19:37:12 GMT -5
First of all, you should go read a couple accepted bios but unfortunately there's not many mage characters around so I can't suggest too much there. This isn't anywhere near long enough, it tells us almost nothing about your character, who they are, where they came from or what they've done.
EDIT: God damnit Night.
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Post by piwii999 on May 2, 2012 20:11:26 GMT -5
Ok this is an OK bio but we already have a crazy mage person (spwack) but he's on zasutis side so I reccomend that you become an average mage -you can still be crazy- working in the university of magic.
Thnx
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Post by deltajesus on May 2, 2012 20:26:25 GMT -5
A few things piwii. Firstly, spwack isn't the only crazy mage and we need more mages around anyway. And secondly, the magic university is still lacking staff, a neutral location and any leader so currently no one can be part of it. Thirdly, it really doesn't matter what side of the war he's on, it's pretty evenly matched and he didn't mention anything about it anyway. And finally if you're going to correct bios then please don't use text speak.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on May 3, 2012 5:45:42 GMT -5
A few things piwii. Firstly, spwack isn't the only crazy mage and we need more mages around anyway. And secondly, the magic university is still lacking staff, a neutral location and any leader so currently no one can be part of it. Thirdly, it really doesn't matter what side of the war he's on, it's pretty evenly matched and he didn't mention anything about it anyway. And finally if you're going to correct bios then please don't use text speak. We will need to talk more about magical education when my exams finish. |
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Post by deltajesus on May 3, 2012 6:48:38 GMT -5
A few things piwii. Firstly, spwack isn't the only crazy mage and we need more mages around anyway. And secondly, the magic university is still lacking staff, a neutral location and any leader so currently no one can be part of it. Thirdly, it really doesn't matter what side of the war he's on, it's pretty evenly matched and he didn't mention anything about it anyway. And finally if you're going to correct bios then please don't use text speak. We will need to talk more about magical education when my exams finish. I will be more than happy to put some effort into creating a proper magical establishment on aoc, although I feel I may be able to do little more than provide tea. |
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Post by sirveleno on May 3, 2012 7:35:20 GMT -5
Hey I'm a mage too! Anyway, ya you need more background history on your character. We need to know why he is in Rull, who his family is if he even remembers, etc. Good luck, happy writings...
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on May 3, 2012 7:40:59 GMT -5
Hey I'm a mage too! Anyway, ya you need more background history on your character. We need to know why he is in Rull, who his family is if he even remembers, etc. Good luck, happy writings... Indeed you are-probably one of the greatest ever enchanters to ever grace your race. |
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on May 10, 2012 12:55:20 GMT -5
Little more work needed but it has promise. Also I am the most amazing Android enchanter ever! Yeah, wrap your head around that. :/
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Post by sbongkh on May 13, 2012 2:11:21 GMT -5
Spwack is a crazy SCIENTIST. He only happens to be an average Mage (hero wise). Plus, not much is known about him because he doesn't really RP a lot. I say, bring in more crazy mages!
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Post by Prekrasna.Smiert (chaza507) on May 13, 2012 2:17:00 GMT -5
Spwack is a crazy SCIENTIST. He only happens to be an average Mage (hero wise). Plus, not much is known about him because he doesn't really RP a lot. I say, bring in more crazy mages! you can never have enough craaazy mages  , this bio does sound like the start of a.. i will find out what happened to my parents, evil person killed my parents, i want to avenge my dead parents. not that i have a problem with it, but if you do go down that road make it interesting  |
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, this bio does sound like the start of a.. i will find out what happened to my parents, evil person killed my parents, i want to avenge my dead parents. not that i have a problem with it, but if you do go down that road make it interesting 
