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Post by cjtwist2000 on May 9, 2012 20:09:46 GMT -5
If youre hearing this I may be your only chance. First My name is John, John Iskandar my family is a group of Warriors and mages. For decades me and my family have fought off other magicians that want to rule the world. Now we have gotten weaker I have been struck down to a lvl 1 warrior I used to be a master but I now forgot all of my fighting skills. You if your the right person you may be the last chance I am not war crazed but I must do what needs to be done. For now I work as an engineer for some extra money for my family. Okay I dont have time to waste if your the right person youll know who and know how. Good Luck.
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on May 10, 2012 9:48:48 GMT -5
Have you ever heard of the modify button? I am getting quite irritated with the continued submissions of extra threads. Just modify and post a response stating as such. This bio still lacks a lot of info. :/ It is as if you didn't try at all!
Going through and deleting all the others...
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WILD_PICKLE
Experienced Miner
A WILD_PICKLE apeared!!
Posts: 361
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Post by WILD_PICKLE on May 10, 2012 14:15:11 GMT -5
This is a bio? Read accepted ones so u can get an idea of what to do, cus this is bad
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on May 10, 2012 14:26:18 GMT -5
What. The. <3. Is. This?? If this is your attempt at being a better engineer than Mav, it's pathetic. As the others have said, read some accepted character bios.
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Post by Orman Grandclaw on May 10, 2012 15:30:34 GMT -5
This requires WAY more effort. Describe the personality of the character, give information about his aspirations etc. No one want to RP with a zombie.
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Post by sbongkh on May 13, 2012 2:13:15 GMT -5
You'd be surprised Orman...
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Post by Prekrasna.Smiert (chaza507) on May 13, 2012 2:20:53 GMT -5
You'd be surprised Orman... that deserves a lol... this bio is certainly lacking in details maybe explain more why and how you lost your fighting skills |
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Post by sbongkh on May 13, 2012 8:07:51 GMT -5
He never had any. Simple.
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piwii999
Veteran Explorer
Hur Hur caterpie
Posts: 501
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Post by piwii999 on May 18, 2012 3:01:36 GMT -5
I would fix it up but cbb I just got back from scholl camp and I am TIRED...*sigh*
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