Razziez Bonatavia

[razziez]

mixed decent, less than half dwarf mainly human.

Razziez Bonatavia is the heir to a modest family that has a nice setup in life

- they own a bakery
-a smithy
- and a coal mine in a far away land

Bonatavia's mom is Ingrid Bonatavia his father is Issac Bonatavia

he is an only child

as an only child Razziez had a lot of time to hone his skills in the family smithy

wood,iron, and even diamond tools Raz (as some called him) could make any tool.

Raz is a people person skilled in the silver tongue way

Raz left home early on to see the world, and his travels took him to this continent trying to carve a name for himself into the history books.

[sbongkh]

Could you make it more storylike rather than a report? Plus we already have a dude called Raz, so you can't be called that.

[piwii999]

Read some of the accepted bios first look how they are set up and model your story on that don't forget to use the modify button!

[Rei.Blackwind]

Yep. Try to make it more like a story. You have good starting points though.

[Orman Grandclaw]

If you don't want you Bio to take the form of a traditional story you always tell your Bio in the perspective of another character.