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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on May 13, 2012 19:39:41 GMT -5
"My...god..!"thought Zauberius.He had been knocked unconscious and in the Inn all around him where the body's of people who weir pale and all had either a stab wound or two holes on their neck and they seemed to have no blood left the only evidence of it was on the floor.And on his face....He knew he had done something that came along with vampirism...he had sucked the life out of these people.from that day he vowed never to fight well again...everytime battle was called he was either wounded and carried off the battlefield or forced himself to retreat.Every town he came across said he was useless...always the same...he made several powerful enemies for lashing out at them by tongue not sword or Axe or spear...or even fist!
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Post by sirveleno on May 14, 2012 3:02:36 GMT -5
fix your spelling. Also nice bio.
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WILD_PICKLE
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Post by WILD_PICKLE on May 14, 2012 11:49:18 GMT -5
Lotta run on sentences
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Post by sbongkh on May 15, 2012 18:00:21 GMT -5
Vampires... drinking blood? What is this?
And how did they get the holes in their neck? You have to explain THAT.
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD Okay, got bored.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on May 15, 2012 18:55:50 GMT -5
i have problems with run on sentences and two holes=two vangs
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Post by WILD_PICKLE on May 15, 2012 21:12:57 GMT -5
i have problems with run on sentences and two holes=two vangs Them fix your problems and break them apart |
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Post by ZipZapMan on May 15, 2012 21:19:31 GMT -5
i have problems with run on sentences and two holes=two vangs Them fix your problems and break them apart Cut him some slack dude |
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on May 26, 2012 17:12:28 GMT -5
If you have a fing problem with it dont bitch to me keep it to yourselves iam serious iam getting annoyed with negative comments seriously
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Post by minea on May 27, 2012 17:10:59 GMT -5
Ok Zauber if you post bios you HAVE to be open to recieve cinstructive critism some of these post are constructive, others however are nasty. Guys if you're going to post comments that are negative please only do so with the intent to have constructive criticism not just to be outright mean or because you have an individual problem with the postee XD
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Post by Shezz Raulo on May 27, 2012 17:49:45 GMT -5
If you have a fing problem with it dont bitch to me keep it to yourselves iam serious iam getting Watch the language |
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 3, 2012 14:08:48 GMT -5
sorry about the language Shezz but iam serious i accept constructive critisism but i will shoot down complete negativatied and the reason why iam writing pretty bad bios is because the first one was a complete and total train wreck and iam trying to put an end to this character.
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Post by minea on Jun 3, 2012 21:55:59 GMT -5
Well keep on keeping on mate.
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Post by shteve34 on Jun 4, 2012 18:52:56 GMT -5
i enjoy the *cough* spelling... *cough*
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Post by Aura.Blackwind on Jun 4, 2012 23:17:15 GMT -5
Only negative things have been said, and you all need to cut the damn trolling. Next time I see something like this, I will just delete your comment. Locked.
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