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Post by craftingmegalord on May 19, 2012 8:34:53 GMT -5
One day my family were out fishing and a storm started. We all fell out of the boat. And sa a light we swam to it. And thare was a portal!Luckely my brother packed eyes of ender. And we placed them and went threw... The ender dragon cursed my familly and said only the older can go so i was alone...Then a saw we were on a island in nowhare and i jumped...And i fell fell fell...Into the void and finally i hit the ground at that moment i turned imoratal i did not get hurt but after i was safe i tured mortal...I had landed in age of city craft!
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33rob
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Post by 33rob on May 19, 2012 8:59:21 GMT -5
The format of this bio is wrong. There are also spelling mistakes and capitalation errors. If you want this to be accepted you need to put more time into this. This is to short and it looks like you put no effort into it
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on May 19, 2012 12:32:46 GMT -5
Title should be the name of your rp character. Also, this is more like a story about minecraft itself than about your character. Eyes of ender don't work here for teleporting. Also this isn't "age of citycraft" The name of the world is "Mirugan" in roleplay. So... see if you can make a story about your character.... not minecraft. :x
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