Jebedeah.Gold

[jebedeah]

Hello
My name is Jebedeah Boyle. I have nickname Gold. I was a baron of lapsed wing of Templar Order in land Thaura. I am good strategist, my fighting skills are good too, but because I am old (54 years), my strength isn't too big yet. And this weeknes is reason, why I am here. My own Wing discarged me. On my place sits young and strong baron Stranoth, who beat me in duel fight. Only thing that I have left, is my gold complet.
So I come into this land, with bare hands, because I want to start new career here. I AM NOT TOO OLD!! I want to take my name famous in this land! In Thaura is my name famous, but not well. I want back my nickname Gold, because this is my new start and I want to start with all parade.

So, I want nickname Jebedeah Gold

P.S. Sorry for my bad English, I am from Czech Republic ;D

[Darius.Ladimore]

It's a very nice bio jebedeah , coming from a person from Chech Republic. Anyways, back on topic. I can't think of any other way to improve your bio but to increase the length and add more language. Once it's longer, I'm sure it will be accepted

[Rei.Blackwind]

Not bad for someone that does not have English as first language. My biggest issue with it is the smiley face emoticons. Oh and the title of post should be the rp character name you want.