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Post by ZipZapMan on Jun 9, 2012 20:20:44 GMT -5
Interesting story zauber, I would suggest after every sentence that you put 1 space to make it less confusing.
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Post by Dean.Fowler on Jun 9, 2012 22:06:57 GMT -5
Interesting story zauber, I would suggest after every sentence that you put 1 space to make it less confusing. I agree with Zip, and not only can it be confusing, but it can sometimes lead others onto the wrong line. |
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 9, 2012 22:39:30 GMT -5
ok zip i give you permission to do that and thank you for the compliment
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Post by sbongkh on Jun 10, 2012 3:24:26 GMT -5
Grammar. Check the piece of writing on Microsoft Word and edit according to the green and red lines.
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Post by minea on Jun 10, 2012 5:13:28 GMT -5
Lol sad sbongkh, vgood job Zauber
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Post by ZipZapMan on Jun 10, 2012 8:38:41 GMT -5
ok zip i give you permission to do that and thank you for the compliment There you go ;D |
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 17:38:56 GMT -5
thans zip for fixing and also thank you its been a while since i wrote a good bio and i want to stick with this character for AWHILE so yeah theres gonna be alot more
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Post by minea on Jun 10, 2012 18:01:57 GMT -5
Cant wait mate.
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 19:14:13 GMT -5
thank you very much!And anyone else think it would be cool if we could actually sail ships on the water?You know what ill see if theres a plugin for that.And please can someone suggest what the next should be?
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 19:23:00 GMT -5
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Post by Rei.Blackwind on Jun 10, 2012 19:36:53 GMT -5
UM... interesting story. But is this supposed to be a bio update? If so it's in the wrong spot. I need to move it then.
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Post by ZipZapMan on Jun 10, 2012 19:47:14 GMT -5
thank you very much!And anyone else think it would be cool if we could actually sail ships on the water?You know what ill see if theres a plugin for that.And please can someone suggest what the next should be? That would be interesting if we could sail ships.... Epic water battles! |
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Post by Zauberius.Goldfinger on Jun 10, 2012 21:16:37 GMT -5
its not an update and i suppose i should say this CHAPTER 2:USELESS IS NO LONGER GOING IN THIS CHARACTER its not an update and id ask if someone get rid of that please?
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