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Post by oxin30 on Oct 14, 2012 13:46:31 GMT -5
oxin30 was once a farmer in a town far in the north where he lived with his eleven people in harmony. his farther oxonic who he was named after, gave him sword lessons every day so that he could one day join the royal guard. but oxin30 secretly discoverd his magical abilities to heal and resurrect and slowy stated to understand his power. a few years later the town was attacked by orcs and oxin's farther was brutally murderd before his eyes.
he luckily survived by hiding in cupords and barley made it through the flames. but now his is back more powerful and has sworn vengence to the orcs who slaughted his town.
and no one will get in his way
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Post by Rowan.Pelanger on Oct 14, 2012 14:31:40 GMT -5
Ok, take a look at some of the accepted bios. Your character has no legitimate name, no server lore is mentioned, there are no orcs, there is a but of god modding and it seems like a bunch of jot notes, the entire 'bio" is in third person. Also WAY too short.
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mikeh
Tree Puncher
What is power, without the knowledge or wisdom to use it?
Posts: 85
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Post by mikeh on Oct 14, 2012 20:28:29 GMT -5
im sorry... but... this bio negates almost all server lore, it has many gramatical errors and MUST be fixed, like Rowan said, god modding involved. You cannot ressurect people in AoC, you can only heal. I would say honestly, just scrap this and make a new bio using the "modify" button.
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Shawn Benoit
Experienced Miner
I AM FEAR AND FEAR FEARS NOTHING!
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Post by Shawn Benoit on Oct 14, 2012 21:34:03 GMT -5
NO
GODDAMN
ORCS
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Post by fireblitz223 on Oct 22, 2012 14:23:20 GMT -5
im sorry... but... this bio negates almost all server lore, it has many gramatical errors and MUST be fixed, like Rowan said, god modding involved. You cannot ressurect people in AoC, you can only heal. I would say honestly, just scrap this and make a new bio using the "modify" button. Dude just chill, they are only new you don't go off at them relax. I only have to say add more information, be descriptive and a role play name. |
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Post by warcat6 on Oct 22, 2012 15:02:20 GMT -5
orphan orphan orphan
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