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Post by bobruk on Oct 24, 2012 23:04:55 GMT -5
Add more detail and make it longer. Good starting point though
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Post by Marcel.Camthalion (TheGran) on Oct 25, 2012 0:24:40 GMT -5
A little more detail would be good, has potential though.
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Post by Brindale on Oct 25, 2012 0:37:02 GMT -5
Really short. Put that info in story form!!!
Also, be a bit more specific. What is the disease or it's symptoms?
What type of church? and which god would it worship?
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