Nihel.Castor

[hennessyintoxica]

Name: Nihel Castor
Age: 27
Birthdate: July 9
Story: Nihel is a bad egg who wants to start anew. He grew up in a life of luxury, but instead of following a noble path he took advantage of his parents position in society and began a life of crime. His last heist was robbing a large bank in a small town with only an iron sword. Now that he has enough money to live free, he came to a town, looking to live a normal life, secret supported by the large amount of money he has. Only time will tell if he is truly changed, or just waiting for his next heist.

[Rowan.Pelanger]

You know nothing of server lore. This is so boring. Where is the Mooshroom?( make it longer)

[Serpine Flux]

BEEF!!! WHERE'S THE BEEF?! I'm not sure we have banks. If I'm wrong someone will probably correct me. The spelling and grammar is all correct. Just lengthen it. Good luck I hope your bio gets accepted

[fireblitz223]

Oct 31, 2012 21:27:41 GMT -5 Rowan.Pelanger said:

You know nothing of server lore. This is so boring. Where is the Mooshroom?( make it longer)

Ummm Pip his only new, of course he dosen't know the server lore nub. On Topic: What Serpine says is correct just juice it up more with information and you might just get it accepted. Good Luck

[SupaDupaZombeeh]

We have vaults and treasuries, A city's wealth is protected somehow. Although not many towns have a physical vault, [Rull, Takara, Elysium do/willl have one] IRP the towny bank would be a physical thing. After all, one would not walk around with +1000 pieces of gold.

The bio is a bit short; more general information about your character's morals and some more background. Tell us a bit more about why you chose a life of crime instead of luxury.

[ZipZapMan]

Nov 1, 2012 4:39:35 GMT -5 Serpine Flux said:

BEEF!!! WHERE'S THE BEEF?! I'm not sure we have banks. If I'm wrong someone will probably correct me. The spelling and grammar is all correct. Just lengthen it. Good luck I hope your bio gets accepted

*pulls out sword* Prepare to die - that message was for craftstal

Fix up your bio, expand it a ton.