Maythan Crystillin

[meyboo2 (Maythan.Crystillin)]

Maythan Erose Crystillin (May-th-am E-rose Cry-Still-in)

(Brother of Acen.Movern.Crystillin)

When Maythan was just a infant a group of Bandits attacked his home he cried and cried but no one came. He heard his mother scream his name but she couldn't break through the wall of Bandits. After the attack on the house a married couple of Bandits walked into the room tempted to kill the child but as the couple tried they couldn't they learned that they could never have a child so they took the infant into there home. He lived there for quite some time learned the ways of stealing and fighting alas he never loved fighting alone only with Brothers in Arms, and enjoyed farming very much. He lived there until he was 13 which every bandit had to he left his home and looked for a new place to call his own. After a short while he found out that he was not his only kin other then his half brother but that he had a full Elven brother who lived hidden somewhere so he searches for his calling and searches for Acen.

(Acen.Crystillin has approved this as he is my own brother.)

[Acenvar.Crystillin (meyboo)]

I have approved this just to let the Admins/RP Mods now. For the typing though you can decide.

[joshivar]

Same childhood bandit raid story we've seen a million times before. This also has no references to race, which almost automatically means human, and how would he have discovered he had a half brother? Potential for this one is low, try something with a bit more flair, but maybe keep that you two don't know each other. Otherwise explaining a sudden brother that's always been there is difficult.

[Acenvar.Crystillin (meyboo)]

Maythan Erose Crystillin (May-th-am E-rose Cry-Still-in)

(Brother of Acen.Movern.Crystillin)
Race: ½ Elven ½ Human
Maythan was born on a cold fall day when the leaves are fully golden and the wind is cool but the ground is warm his l. When Maythan was just an infant a group of Bandits attacked his home he cried and cried but no one came. He heard his mother scream his name but she couldn't break through the wall of Bandits. After the attack on the house a married couple of Bandits walked into the room tempted to kill the child but as the couple tried they couldn't they learned that they could never have a child so they took the infant into their home. He lived there for quite some time learned the ways of stealing and fighting alas he never loved fighting alone only with Brothers in Arms, and enjoyed farming very much. He lived there until he was 13 which every bandit had to he left his home and looked for a new place to call his own. After a short while his mother remarried to another man, this gave way to his Brother -in-law . Maythan now searches for sanctuary and to do what he loves.

(Acen.Crystillin has approved this as he is my own brother.
Posted By Acen Crystillin written by Maythan)

[piwii999]

Just wait. Most Rp mods check it during the weekend

[Aura.Blackwind]

I've been putting this off for a while now because of the constant bumping. Let it be heard that those that bump will be pushed back for a very long time due to constant birching. Now then, onto the story. A married bandit couple? That doesn't make a whole lot of sense. Try reading some accepted character bios to get an idea of what to write. Also, there is a button called the modify button. Use it. I've deleted all of your comments that are bumps Acen. Anymore of it and I will delete your comments without informing you before I do so.