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Post by lealj2498 on Nov 7, 2012 18:50:32 GMT -5
Name: Acceptus.Acolyte Race: Human Age: 16
'Pray, father, give me thy blessing, for I have sinned.'
The priest started; he was tired in mind and body; his soul was sad and his heart heavy as he sat in the terrible solitude of the confessional ever listening to the same dull round of oft-repeated sins. He was weary of the conventional tones and matter-of-fact expressions. Would the world always be the same? For nearly twenty centuries the Christian priests had sat in the confessional and listened to the same old tale. The world seemed to him no better; always the same, the same The young priest sighed to himself, and for a moment almost wished people would be worse. Why could they not escape from these old wearily-made paths and be a little original in their vices, if sin they must? But the voice he now listened to aroused him from his reverie It was so soft and gentle, so diffident and shy.
He gave the blessing, and listened. Ah, yes! he recognized the voice now. It was the voice he had heard for the first time only that very morning: the voice of the little acolyte that had served his Mass.
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Post by Prekrasna.Smiert (chaza507) on Nov 7, 2012 23:15:34 GMT -5
A little small BUT it is too well written to be true... if anything it sounds like a bible passage... anyway this does not really describe a character, the character you will play. fix that and extend it a bit adding why and how you came to mirugan.
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Post by piwii999 on Nov 7, 2012 23:38:55 GMT -5
Well written and I think this will be... Acceptus.. #punswag
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Post by Ezio on Nov 8, 2012 5:58:09 GMT -5
Christian doesn't exist in Mirugen.
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