MinerBoy898s RP BIO

[minerboy898]

The Girl Hannah(Character Name) Is A little Neko(Human cat)
Is Kidnaped So she Escapes to find her loved ones/seek for her lover1 So when she Walks From a random Village she comes opon The City Age Of Citycraft And Looks And Gets herself enrolled in a new school and Meets New Friends
So she starts to Find Matirials To build The House and Furnature
Character Name- Hannah Len
What Shall She do?

[Prekrasna.Smiert (chaza507)]

there is no neko for a race the city is actually Rull which resides in the continent of mirugan, this is not an rp bio. this is an explanation of a noob joining a completely ooc server, your bio is the story of a character with whom you will assume the role.

[Marcel.Camthalion (TheGran)]

Sorry, it is way too short and Neko? That is not a race of AOC. Needs a lot more detail and needs to have correct punctuation and spelling.

[minerboy898]

Ok Thank you For the Helpful tips