Minerboy898 3rd Try RP BIO!!

[minerboy898]

It All starts with a girl named Hannah.Len She is the oldest of the 3 Children. Their Family is a Warrior family there great grandfather was Sam.Len He was the family starter,fought in millions of fights and also lived in Rull City! So Hannah is asleep in her room so thats when here younger sister Sophie wakes her up
Hannah THE HOUSE IS ON FIRE!!said Sophie. Thats when Hannah thinks that its a joke. She walks in the living room and its filled with fire so Hannah wasnt Thinking And picked her sister up Rushes to there room and pickes there stuff up Hannah took her and her gear away from the house with out looking back....Hannah! Sophie said. What said Hannah. What About Mommy and Daddy and Karin said Sophie. Then the house Boom calapsed and Hannah Cryies and says sorry Sophie they didnt make it. said Hannah. Sophie starts to cry Its okey said Hannah Atleast we survived if we went back we would all be dead!Hannah said Sophie starts to walk toward the road. What were are we going!?!?! Said Hannah Sophie says Were going to Rull City Remember Grampa Len Said that most of are Family is there. I know its in the middle but Hannah is 17 yearsold Sophie is 14 years old Karin is 8yearsold! Hannah said Thats Right Good Job Sophie Lets walk there thats when Hannah & Sophie Walk 12 Miles to Rull City Gladly Hannah had food in her Gear bag.She had 13 melon Sophie and Hannah Sit down And Eat some melons.Killed a few Creepers,Zombies,and Spiders.They started to talk Sophie said Hannah i wonder if Grandma, Aunt Grace, and Uncle Josh Live in Rull City i hope.Sophie Dont Say That Of corase they live there still said Hannah. Walked a little bit longer Gladly Soon they Arrive to a sign that said Welcome To Rull City!
There Grandmother was at a shop and saw them and said Oh my gosh Is it really you Hannah and Sophie Hannah and Sophie Nodded There Gramma asked Where the rest of the family was at Hannah Said Crying They Died in A house fire. There Grandma Hugged them and took them to her House.You Guys Go take a nap it must have been a Long Walk said there Grandma Thats When The night was over and it was Day time Hannah toke a walk and a Guy named Novus Greeted Here and they Hanged out till dark!


Sorry If Short This took me 2hours and 23 Min

User Name Minerboy898

[SupaDupaZombeeh]

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[Aura.Blackwind]

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