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Post by skylord on Nov 17, 2012 1:28:05 GMT -5
Name: Skylord.Vaktus
Race: Human
I am Skylord.Vaktus, born at the ticking of a war. As I grew up my family had to move from village to village. The war always caught up to us, yet I never knew what started it and why. My father died in the middle of a moving. I had to start doing more work. The war ended and years passed, and I started training in the art of battle to defend my mother from pirates. After some months passed anybody who tried to attack my mother and I would not have their heart beating in seconds. I started moving away while my mother lived in here house safely, I destroyed the pirates that could end her life and defended the citizens that could make their homes better, and here I am...
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Post by ZipZapMan on Nov 17, 2012 11:32:07 GMT -5
You took on a ship full of pirates? Impressive. You're missing important details such as age and other things. Please do try to add in those small details, it makes a story from good to best.
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Post by skylord on Nov 17, 2012 21:42:29 GMT -5
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Name: Skylord.Vaktus
Race: Human
I am Skylord.Vaktus, born at the ticking of a war. When I was about 10 my family had to move from village to village. The war always caught up to us, yet I never knew what started it and why. My father died in the middle of a moving. I had to start doing more work. The war ended and years passed, and I started training in the art of battle to defend my mother from pirates, criminals that would show no mercy when attacking. After some months passed anybody who tried to attack my mother and I would not have their heart beating in seconds. I started moving away while my mother lived in here house safely, I destroyed the pirates that could end her life and defended the citizens that could make their homes better, and here I am...
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Post by joshivar on Nov 17, 2012 21:55:02 GMT -5
First of all just use the modify button. Secondly, how in the world did a ten year old learn "The art of battle" to sufficient skill level to kill ANYONE in seconds, much less several bloodthirsty murderers who wouldn't think twice about ganging up on a child?
Is Skylord a title or his actual first name?
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2012 22:18:49 GMT -5
So, if your a Skylord, you may wanna read our lore for the Skylords, they're all kinda dead...
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Post by ZipZapMan on Nov 17, 2012 22:32:51 GMT -5
So, if your a Skylord, you may wanna read our lore for the Skylords, they're all kinda dead... If you read, he posted his race is human, derp.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 18, 2012 1:08:22 GMT -5
His name was Skylord, I am easily confused xD
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Post by Nahndrickh Veldspar on Nov 19, 2012 10:32:12 GMT -5
I was thinking the same thing, lololololololol.
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