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Post by robber997 on Nov 19, 2012 16:12:29 GMT -5
As a boy from Europa, Sachvie loved hunting with his father, until one day, a dragonwarrior killed his dad. As sachvie fleed, he vowed when he grows up, to avenge his father. He grew up training, hunting, tracking. Until, one day, on his 27th birthday he came across a kingdom known as Mirugan. Walking through the woods trying to get to a local Tavern for food,bed, and drink, he was suddenly attacked by a group of mages came out of nowhere to kill him. He has been trying to find out why ever since... could the dragonwarrior andthe mages to be connected? It didnt matter. He would kill every mage and dragonwarrior until he found the one. He grew fond of the color red as the bloodshed continued.
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Post by bobruk on Nov 19, 2012 16:15:08 GMT -5
Needs MUCH more detail. Why was he hunting, where did he come from, etc. Take a look at some of the accepted bios and hit the modify button in the corner when you are ready to add on. Also, title needs to be First.Last name.
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Post by ZipZapMan on Nov 19, 2012 16:52:37 GMT -5
Some errors with the spacing. Another vengeful person? Really?
As bob stated above, needs more detail.
Where is the beef?
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