The Midlands

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The Midlands - History

[classified] Object of Secrecy by order of King Vexx[classified]

THE ZATHIA
PROJECT

Time Date: 1000 years ago,
Diplomats of towns and villages in what would be Mirugan today sign many Peace Treaties with The Midlands on account of they share resources. Treaty agreed hesitantly.

Time Date: 930 years ago,
The Midlands become second largest empire in all history, sizing up Mirugan. Many people move to The Midlands in fear of that the continent will take over many towns and villages.

Time Date: 870 years ago,
Present day Towns in Mirugan form secret allegiance with each other, incase of attack from the Midlands

Time Date: 857 years ago,
Classic Book - 'Far Away lands above Hell' reaches 2 million copies, becoming a best seller in the market. Tragic death of
Cery Ferol during attempt to swim across river between Midlands and Present day Mirugan.

Time Date: 833 years ago,
Scientist 'Alev Virok' Finds that the river between the two continents leads to the molten core of the planet.

Time Date: 800 - 740 years ago,
Midlands population encounter Baby Boom and armies increase rapidly in size. Rest of Planet begin to create bigger armies incase of attack. Riots break out in the capitals and Law enforcers go on strike from the rise in crimes.

Time Date: 729 years ago,
King of present day Rull Assassinated and Country goes into chaos. Midlands called in to help.

Time date: 727 - 713 years ago,
Civil war breaks out, Midlands refuses to help, millions die.
1/5 population move to Midlands.

Time date: Around 700 years ago,
Peace Treaty broken and Diplomatic Civilized dispute breaks out between Midlands and rest of Planet. Midlands win lawsuit and secretly begun preparing attack

Time Date: 500 years ago,
Adventures explore every corner of planet execpt The Midlands, books written and published about each other e.g.
The Continent of Hell (horror)

Time Date: Around 457 years ago,
Midland Archeologists Discover tombs - 1 goes Mentally mad and was taken to court.

Time Date: 455 - 449 years ago,
Conspiracies arise on evil Devils and Spirits locked away in land, Scientists prove wrong. Law enforcers get countless calls on seeing ancient elemental Warriors but dissmised as signs of Madness and Drunkness.

Time Date: 450 years ago
Present Day Rull and many other cities start eliminating evidence of The Midlands. Assign soldiers to guard by the Hell River.

Time Date: 436 years ago,
Ancient spirirts attack Midlands and Rest of Planet, World 'goes into peril. Head Spirit recalled as 'Zathia' '

Time Date 418 years ago,
Zathia locked away in tomb, while Elemental Guardians Attack spirits and send into underwold

Time Date: 56 years ago,
Midlands prepare attack while present king initiates 'Zathia project' , start wiping out all info of Midlands, the Elemental Warrior, Zathia and replace with realistic fake info

Time Date: 47 years ago,
Cevy Fero Launches third biggest attack in history but stops as Rull call bluff. Great Warrior splits Hell River and the two continents drift dramatically fast away from each other.
Midlands loose all vegetation and become scrub-land, 4/5 population move to the other continent.

Time Date: 41 years ago,
Assassin Orginization created in Midlands, Zathia project succeeds and all men and women killed or 'taken care of' who knew of The Midlands. Execpt Royalty and high ranking People. Secret Law was put in stating if one to reveal any info on the Midlands without a respected reason to by high authority, the teller and the receiver are executed anonymously. Zathia born in human form (weak) receives talents of father and mother, but no weaknesses. Ran away young acting like he was 'possessed' by the devil.

Time Date: 15 years ago,
Dosk Sceprey finds tomb that encased the power of Zathia and was released. Also finds Sword of Lightning used by an Elemental Warrior, which was there when the Warrior died from Zathia (sword placed by Midlands Person in tomb for good luck) Armour was sent flying through the air, not to be ever seen again.

Time Date: 8 days ago,
Midlands has 0 population, Dosk Sceprey presumed dead while crossing ocean. Regarded impossible to cross to Midlands and vice versa, as Hell River has became too strong.


Thanks for reading this isnt the whole of the history that will be posted later Shout out to Micah (igmikey) Annabeth (nightslash) and especially Ven (VentusKB) for helping me get these ideas and RPing with me please approve as official history PLZ x Steven Hawking's IQ

[ventuskb]

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[Micah Keyshin]

Lets see what to say about this..

Firstly its a nice history of your lands, however it does have several problems.

one is that the years dont seem very coherent with server history.

Another is that this history goes against the servers canon. It's perfectly fine to have a forgotten/undiscovered place but creating it in such a fashion that it was greater than our servers current land of Mirugan. in ABSOLUTE history, not of documented history Mirugan as a whole was never a united force, therefore they could not lose a war. The various towns around the land of Mirugan have have in fact gone to war with only small towns being defeated in battle. Rull for one, has never lost a bout. Zasuti has been an evil entity since world-forge and has only resided in the realm of the gods, the nether, and the physical world.

In summary, you just cant make a forgotten land that was ever greater than the servers Land of Mirugan for the sheer fact that it breaks many predefined absolute histories of the server and could be considered a form of RP godmoding.

[The_Netherender]

This kinda made my eyes cross... and... my brain. ow...

[deltajesus]

Time for the good old green pen treatment.
1. "on account of they share resources" isn't great English, something like "on account of them sharing resources" would look a little better.
2. "Midlands become largest empire" either "Midlands become the largest empire" or "Midland becomes largest empire" would be better English.
3. "doubling whole of Mirugan" either "doubling the whole of Mirugan" or "double the size of all Mirugan"
4."rest of planet begin" "the rest of the planet begins"
5."and secretly begun preparing attack" "and secretly began preparing (an/to) attack"
There's a few others but I've barely slept over the past few days and I can't be parsed, I suppose if you're gonna fix any I can always just post the rest when I'm not as tired.
Please don't take offense by this, I just think that if this does become official then it should be in perfect English.

[coolcreepers]

DeltaJesus: I see what you mean, the reason I wrote in that kind of bad English is because it is a documented file written quiclky to sum it up. Like bullet points. e.g.

.Dom went for tea. Returned later with bruise from chair.
instead of:Dom went for some tea, he returned later with a bruise from his chair he hurt himself on.
But thank you for a reply.

~~~CoolCreepers~~~~

[deltajesus]

I thought that may have been the case but some of it isn't just note form it is just bad english such as "doubling whole of Mirugan" something like "double size of Mirugan" would be acceptable english and would be in note form.

[coolcreepers]

k already edited it thats it....



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